Update on things

Working on Chapter 4. This is where the adventure part starts. I know I kind of dragged it on a bit (Especially since it's one of the key elements), but I kind of feel that all that I've done alright. If there was one thing I wish I did shorten. It was the funeral. I think it went to long.

Anyway a few people have asked me some questions so here are some answers.

1. Yes the Griffins will be returning and yes more about them will be explained.

2. Yes Gilda will show up. But not until chapter 5.

3. I will not say who will and won't be accompanying Rainbow Dash on this journey. You'll get your answers in chapter 4.

4. Yes i changed my style a bit. It was an attempt to try and make it look better to get on Equestria daily, but work still was needed. Still, it feels and looks better. No, I got turned down again for a few reasons, mostly technical (I really wish I was a better technical guy) but it sounded like it was close.

On that note, I've decided to just focus the story here on FIMfiction.net. I might try EqD another time, but not for a while.

I also appreciate people's opinion (good and ill) on this story and ways they think it could be better. I look to my reviewers on way to improve. I'm not the best, but as long as I can make people like my stories while also improving them. I'm content.

Other then that, not much.

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