Feb
4th
2012
Chapter 1 and Chapter 2 re-edited · 11:20pm Feb 4th, 2012
Well guys, chapter 1 and chapter 2 of Upon Wings of Sacrifice have be re-edited. Nothing's majorly changed except for a few grammar errors and better description of the scenes. I also think it's a lot better then it was before. You don't have to read it again if you already read the first two chapters already. I did this for three reasons: 1. To try again getting this on Equestria daily, 2. To fix some mistakes I made, 3. Just make the story better over all.
Chapter 3 still being worked on. Hope it comes out soon.
Let me know what you think of the new edits.
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Rated Ponystar · 166 views
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...you bucking tease!
that is all.
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umm....sorry?
Well, keep up the good work :)