You shouldn'tllisten to what they say the only thing that should matter about your story is that you are proud of it and if you are then let them try to stop you because eventually they will give up and realize they were probally wrong

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Dude, lose the tension. As much as I agree, that this guys needs to improve his skills substantially, we have to remember to love, tolerate, and Brony on.

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Wow, Patient x. What are you, five years old? You're calling someone else an "asshole" because -gaps- they aren't instantly good at writing? Even if her reactions weren't top notch mature at the criticism, you could at least try to act like less of a dumbass and more like a person addressing someone who's fairly new at writing.

Please learn to write better...PLEASE

I'm sorry, but we don't want you to "continya'".

I'm sorry, it's mainly the fact your story lacked basic English skills and was based heavily off of My Little Dashie (Which is amazingly popular), and there lies your fault.

Unless you can get an original idea, and improve you writing skills, please don't.

You shouldn'tllisten to what they say the only thing that should matter about your story is that you are proud of it and if you are then let them try to stop you because eventually they will give up and realize they were probally wrong

48510
Dude, lose the tension. As much as I agree, that this guys needs to improve his skills substantially, we have to remember to love, tolerate, and Brony on.

48510

Wow, Patient x. What are you, five years old? You're calling someone else an "asshole" because -gaps- they aren't instantly good at writing? Even if her reactions weren't top notch mature at the criticism, you could at least try to act like less of a dumbass and more like a person addressing someone who's fairly new at writing.

Please learn to write better...PLEASE

I'm sorry, but we don't want you to "continya'".

I'm sorry, it's mainly the fact your story lacked basic English skills and was based heavily off of My Little Dashie (Which is amazingly popular), and there lies your fault.

Unless you can get an original idea, and improve you writing skills, please don't.