General understanding [CLOSED] · 4:56pm Jun 21st, 2015
So hello everyone. In light of the rewrite of my latest chapter, I should probably take my slice of humble pie, and admit something in particular.
I am not a good writer. Yeah I mean, who's surprised by that? First it was my previous iteration of Fed up descended into chaos and a whole lot of head scratching, now I've got a confusing jumbled up mess of a chapter, which despite my rewrite, still didn't help. (Alondro said it best. It really isn't that much better.)