Jun
21st
2015
General understanding [CLOSED] · 4:56pm Jun 21st, 2015
So hello everyone. In light of the rewrite of my latest chapter, I should probably take my slice of humble pie, and admit something in particular.
I am not a good writer. Yeah I mean, who's surprised by that? First it was my previous iteration of Fed up descended into chaos and a whole lot of head scratching, now I've got a confusing jumbled up mess of a chapter, which despite my rewrite, still didn't help. (Alondro said it best. It really isn't that much better.)
So yeah. Firstly, I'd like to thank you who have been sticking around for sticking around despite how poorly I've been performing on this story. Secondly, I probably need help... and a pre-reader/editor. So my question is... is there anyone offering?
I cant remember which version of your story I read. It was definitely over a year ago. I have started reading the rewrite now and am interested in helping. You could PM me an explanation of what exactly you are wrestling with on it so i can get an idea of what you are seeing.
For the editor/proofreader part, I volunteer as tribute. I really like the story, and it it be super fun to proof alittle more (Perhaps I should hunt just alittle more). As for helping you write, The best I could do is point out what readers would like, and maybe come up with plot lines.
-Sanity is overrated
3168764 I've taken your offer into consideration, and have concluded that your interest is more certain than the other offer I received. If anything, having a second opinion wouldn't hurt much if at all. So Majora, I'll be keeping in touch, and I'll send you a link to any unpublished chapter, and the passcode to actually read them. Just give me a final confirmation, and I'll make it official.