Come over and watch me draw!!! or something like that.
I am an artist at heart, but sometimes I write stuff here. :P
So! chapter 12, yeah? well, I'm trying to make it blisteringly long, and I'm only up to a thousand words... My problem appears to be that I want it all to be go go go when I really should be doing slow slow slow. This is a little bit annoying, because on my side, it takes forever to write, but only four minutes to read... My biggest problem seems to be that I'm introducing things too fast without any exposition. I'm overcompensating, because I worry about having it become dripping
Blasted Alliance story, Y U SO HARD TO WRITE?!? I find it hard to write this because 1, No one has taken a gander at it and commented and stuff, despite my desperate pleas, and 2, I have an enormous jumble of, for lack of a better word, crap, that I must sort through to get legitimate and plausible story on the computer screen. This process seems to take a while, so bear with me.
At least, that is how my account has been turning out. As you know (or don't know), I have two stories. One, called alliance, I have been spending months working on, while the other, called nightmare, I completed in a week or two. such as it happened, Nightmare got more hits in the first day it was posted than Alliance got in the first month. I need to know, what exactly am I doing wrong with Alliance? if someone would care to clarify what exactly makes this one NOT a worthy read, I
HOW? WHY? WHAT DID I DO TO GET 25 FAVORITES ON A SHORT STORY??? I must have done something right, because the moment Nightmare was approved, it received 2 comments in under 5 seconds! I just really hope it wasn't something along the line of "Hey, cool picture! If this fine fellow knows where to snatch up his cover artwork, then it must mean the story's good!" Seriously, what made all of you this was a worthy piece of literature to lay your eyes upon? Did I stumble upon a
Equestria daily posted a map, so now I know what Equestria is like. Problem is, I got ALL the geography wrong. I'm not even going to bother changing it, I'm so mad!
So, if you find conflicts in this map and the geography of this story, including conflicts of geography within the story, please note that I have noticed, but have decided NOT to fix it.