Thank you for adding Dream Date to your Completed folder. I hope that you had fun reading the story and that you have an exciting day.

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Thanks! I'm glad that you liked it! I have been thinking of doing a sequel or two, though, so that might appear later on.

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First, this is the first story I’ve read that separates Sunset Shimmer and Demon Sunset Shimmer, so you got that going for you. I will admit that it’s not a topic that I thought of exploring before. I did find her being named Sunset Satan to be quite humerous and funny.

Second, There were no spelling or grammar mistakes that I saw. That or I just missed them.

Third, It was a well crafted story in my opinion. The dialogue flowed smoothly. I would have liked an example of what kind of evil urges Sunset Satan still has from time to time and what she does to curb it. Maybe make Sunset Simmer deal with them to deepen their relationship a bit so that the Sunset Satan asking for snuggles wasn’t so out of the blue.

Verdict, I found this story to be quite sweet, wholesome and funny. In my personal opinion though, I found the fart section a bit of a mood killer but thats alright. It gave me a good chuckle so you get some brownie points from me.

Thats my review of your story have a good day and merry carisumasu

Thanks for taking interest in S-snuggles? May I ask what you liked about it?

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Thanks

And a Merry Christmas to you too!