Well My intermission chapter is now up, there are no spoilers within. What am I going to do now?

Write the next arc. Expect to see more Golden Triangle. The next chapter will be ready in approx a week or less.

Rewrite rewrite rewrite. I am attempting to submit to EQD sometime again in September or late August after my proofreaders look the chapters over. Wish me luck.

What would really help me and the story:

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Well all the Great Gathering chapters are up for now, but there's more to come.

Okay I really need you guys feedback on this. Should I do an intermission chapter on my character creation process??? Do you want such a chapter or would that just tear you out of the story experience? Let me know in comments

Sorry for starving you people of updates for the last 3 weeks. Here's ANOTHER update. Thought I might hold off on the next one just to make sure I get it ready on time.

and WHOOPPEEE 30 Likes, taht's awesome.

All RIGHT!
I've been working nonstop rewriting the first three chapters and prologue of the story and i'm satisified to say that while there are a few changes you readers should look over, nothing major.

I also have the first part of The Great Gathering Chapters and woot I'm excited to see your comments. SO please comment away and give me reviews.

Well it's about time I actually got a pony for my profile pic. Whaddaya think?

Welllll Hello... good and bad news

Bad first:
Story revamp/rewrites taking a long time. I still have yet to correct all of the issues EQD has with me. Right now I'm just rewriting for voice and background, attempting to get rid of long boring prose and make the story more character driven. = more character interaction (which is a good thing, but i'm wondering if I'm putting in TOO much dialogue). Expected to get rewrites done sometime in the middle of august.

Good:

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WELL...EQD got back, with a lot of good advice that doesn't target the plot, but targets how the story is developed = MUST REWRITE!!!!

Argh!!

Pre-reader comments

Thank you for taking the time to submit this story to Equestria Daily. Unfortuantely, it does not meet our needs at this time. There are a number of reasons why this should be the case.

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OH YEAH Hit 20 Favs. Now my story is 20% more awesome thanks to you awesome readers! Next chapter ETA 1 week. It will be a long one...Estimated word count...4000 words. 3000 at the very least.

I wanted to get the next chapter up last sat, but a few things happened

Biggest reason: i finished it on sat = it must be proofread by my proofreader Sandz890 and it's VERY LONG= not yet.

Just as big reason: I submitted story to EQD = I'm afraid to do anything until pre-readers tell me the plot is fine and if I do get onto EQD quality checks will have priority chapter output. SORRY!

Other reasons:

3-day job.

Author support recommended fics group.

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WELL...The fourth chapter is taking ages for the below reasons

1. It's a decisive chapter...Almost all of the OC ponies are in this chapter so it's REALLY REALLY LONG...Also, I have to deal with around 6-7 characters interacting with each other about 2-4 at a time and that is annoying and requires a lot of planning if I don't want to screw up.

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