The Rise And Fall Of A Hero: Amnesia

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Baxter Dash has just finished his night shift at his place of work. However, while walking home to his little sister, Baxter Dash notices something that will change life as he knows it. Will he be able to control his emotions and overcome what the world has to throw at him? After the Containment Area has a breach in its security, Baxter Dash finds out the horrible truth about an old enemy....