Mar
2nd
2015
Me · 10:49pm Mar 2nd, 2015
Being a new writer, I have trouble dealing with criticism. I find that my art is much better than my stories. I tend to rush scenes too much (A bad habit I've been trying to break for years) and I much rather write stories with my own characters, because it's much easier to figure out how my own characters would act in a given situation, rather than a pre-existing character. I also notice I have many typos (I blame my mild dyslexia for that, sorry) and not the best descriptions. I have
Hello, Hoyenki. I'm Not Worthy, some guy that likes to critique stories. I took a look over your first posted story here, and I did a review of it that you can find here. Now, I went as easy as I could, but I did try and be thorough with it. I thought your story was okay, and it could use a lot of improvement; I presented quite a bit of criticism there as well. I don't know if you'd like criticism on your story, but you're welcome to look over there if you like. If you do, I'd like to stress that my review isn't meant to discourage or insult you; it's meant to offer what I thought was good and what can be improved on your story. It's all just my opinion, anyhow.
Anyway, welcome to Fimfiction.Net, and I wish you the best with your writing.
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