1. Show vs Tell is not as simple as it seems. 2. As a writer and editor, there is nothing worse than being cooked alive in one's own perspective. 3. I am an amateur. But, I believe I'm getting better.
Fluttershy loves all kinds of creatures, and many take her for granted. But this creature, this being...is something she's not prepared for. Regardless, she treats him with kindness...was it a mistake? -story inspired by the PC game, "The Cat Lady"