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You rushed "Trapped in Gravity Falls".
Great idea and stuff, buts it's too rushed that it just killed my reading vibe. You could use an editor. He/She could really help you improve that story or any other story you plan to write.
Ps- I REALLY loved your first blog post. Made my sides hurt
. Really funny stuff there.
Hope that you like my stories!