• Member Since 19th Apr, 2014
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Mister Citadel


I look at MLP a bit differently than the average Brony. I don't usually read into things to come up with ships. I keep in mind that the show was made for families (well, mostly: I do write clop).

May
18th
2014

Looks like I'm not ready for this... · 10:09pm May 18th, 2014

I've put my fic on hiatus until further notice. I need to figure out what I'm doing wrong, and that may take a while. During that time, I'm returning to my original account and will continue to write there. My original account isn't very well-known, but this will give me the time I need to repair my mistakes. When I return to my fic in a few months—or maybe a year or two—I promise I'll have learned my lesson. I'll continue to work with my editors on repairing the fic over that time.

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May
10th
2014

It's in the works! · 1:28am May 10th, 2014

I have good news for my beloved followers: the reboot of the fic I took down is underway!

I am unable to contact Thardoc right now, so the new first chapter will still be a while. He was helping me with much more than simple spelling and grammar, but the story itself. A lot of the stuff people thought was stupid is either gone, altered, or has a much better explanation now.

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Apr
30th
2014

Let Me Fix This · 12:02am Apr 30th, 2014

First, an explanation on what went down:

I first posted this story with good intentions, honestly I did, Everything was mostly fine at first, there was a lot of controversy at first in the comments, some hate for the concepts, but enough people liked it that I ignored them. I continued writing the story, taking readers’ advice as I went, I even got a few proofreaders to go through and make the story nicer. Then it all started with Plan 9.

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Apr
28th
2014

Apologies for my own immaturity · 7:05pm Apr 28th, 2014

I am deleting my previous two blog posts at the suggestion of another user. I know that umachan took a screenshot of at least one of them so I can never fully erase this incident from my past, but I no longer care. I just want to write something different from the norm. And according to several of my readers (and myself), my fic is not that generic. so, I'm deleting the previous two blog posts and I'll genuinely ask for help in this one.

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Apr
20th
2014

Editors needed! · 6:26pm Apr 20th, 2014

I know that my story, The mare Who Wants A Human Child has made it into the featured box and all that, but many of the comments on the story have pointed out that the story needs to be rewritten from the ground up. I need help with the two chapters I've already posted, so I'm asking for editors to help me to save my fic from crashing and burning in the future. I need to improve the flow of it to make the story read more naturally, and I need to word certain things to help explain

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