Hey, I just wanted to know your opinions on my stories, and I'd like to hear any and all suggestions to make them better. A random vid works just as well. So let me hear that feedback!
Losing my mind, and proud of it!
I'm not sure I can have a happy holiday anymore. You see, I have an old German Shepard. His name is Patches, and he only has three legs, but he's still the softest giant around. He gave us quite a scare lately....... I came home from a drive, only to realize he wasn't at home. My mother said he was having problems breathing, and it was serious. I was devastated. I don't want to loose my buddy..... We went to the pet hospital to see him, and it was just awful. Yet he
Finally........... the hurt is not as bad as it seemed. I am wounded, but still alive. I shall recover, and thanks to my awesome encouragers, I shall write again. I found a song that strengthened my spirit.... I find myself singing it now quite often. Stay opptumistic... I shall put another chapter out for "Apart From The Rest" and that old story on hiatus, "A strike of Black Lightning"... Give me enough time, and I shall even complete more than "The Other Bowtie"!
Okay... I admit it. I wrote a story I drew right out of my head... and found a picture that could of fit. I had no idea the picture was already someone else's. The comments that followed..... I'm revoking the story for good. I've lost all my motivation for writing. If this is what you guys were hoping for, well, it's happened. Thanks for ruining my entire day. Here's the link to the Story.... https://www.fimfiction.net/story/162545/one-fate-changed