Revised chapter 2 · 2:57am Feb 26th, 2014
I have heard your cries and have worked on chapter 2 so that it is longer than 1k words. The area with the revision is in the beginning aka the past so you don't have to read the future bit again. I added the start of the first arc in the past and advanced the plot like one person said I should. Hopefully it is better. *Fingers crossed*