I need opinions, somebody, anybody, please, read this and leave a comment/ critique, i have no idea what I'm doing wrong here, is it the OC? The writing style? Am I just a horrible writer? I'd like to think not but I'm so conflicted with the ratings this story has... I've never seen such negative feedback for my writing before and I just want to know what is wrong with this particular story to garner such negative ratings. I would love if someone could just explain whats wrong with it or give constructive criticism so I can fix what I'm doing wrong. It may sound silly but I'm questioning if I really am cut out for being an author as I aspire to be, that maybe I'm not as good as I thought I was and that I haven't made as much progress as I'd thought... I'm sorry, I kind of ended up rambling a bit, but please, If someone could review this and let me know the mistakes and such I would be forever grateful.

Yet again I find myself staring at this blank summary space wondering what to write to explain the tale I've twisted together. Well,I've got nothing. So I'll just tell you this, this is the story of a peculiar young mare who often finds herself in the company of a once chaotic draconequus as he serves out his sentence in his stone prison and the antics that ensue once free DiscoXOC