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Moniker


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May
18th
2013

Dark fanfic · 12:09am May 18th, 2013

I was most likely going to make this new dark fanfic I wrote have two other side stories both of how Apple bloom and how Sweetie Belle survived in the harsh wasteland each with their own persanal story, And own choices. Hope you enjoy the first one of what Scootaloo did in the wasteland.

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May
3rd
2013

idea and new group. · 9:24pm May 3rd, 2013

Hello I am Princecritic the founder of changeling support dot com this is a quick post just getting the word out there. Don't you think maybe the changelings are way more powerful than normal unicorns, I mean look at the Canterlot wedding not even Celesta could beat the queen of the changelings come on give a round of stomping to the real powerful ponies in equestria the changelings. But now the changelings need your help go to the group founded by me Princecritic entitled changeling support

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May
3rd
2013

review four- Reading mommy's books. · 1:16am May 3rd, 2013

Hello everypony as normal I'm Humane Chaos doing another review. This story is called Reading mommy's books by articunos bitch, this fanfic is a vary stange one. The time plot is while Luna and Celesta were only fillies, persanally I like that he added a lisp to Luna, it may have made it hard to read but it is quite funny. The story is that their mother left for a while, so they decided to read a story from the top shelf which was said to be off limets. The lot gets an B+ because I like

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Apr
27th
2013

review three- Scootaloo is slightly flame retardent · 8:48pm Apr 27th, 2013

Hello everypony it's me again, doing my first comady review. This story is by a person Dontwannaknow it's called Scootaloo is slightly flame retardent it's a story on how Scootaloo got a cutie mark however it's not what she expected. How it started off was odd Rarity most likely pacing around a waiting room. So the story get's an A- for it's creativity it wasn't perfact but it's a start. The speech/description was awsome that deserves an C- the fact you decided to put in real words

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Apr
27th
2013

review two- Sisterly guidence · 5:28am Apr 27th, 2013

Hello everypony with the four or five people reading, this is on a story called sisterly guidence this is by KrishanaKarnak this is a Rainbow Dash/Scootaloo/ and CMC fanfic, note this was a remake of the previous fanfic I think not sure. But in nutshell this story has Rainbow Dash playing the normal fanfic role of being a sister to Scootaloo and since the two fillies live somewhere else from other family members like Rainbow Dash, she lives in Ponyville while her father lives in

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Apr
17th
2013

Review · 4:03am Apr 17th, 2013

I looked at a story called "my little staring contest, Alicorns can stare for a very long time" it was nothing like the others it was creative. The story is about the princesses of day and night having a staring contest for a muffin. Quite strange the dialoge was a little funny at times I do have to bring up. It is made by CosmicAfro that was my first story I read from him and I liked it. The dialoge I give it an C- because of the attude of the story it felt very off on Celesta's

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Apr
13th
2013

send me a story by you · 10:29pm Apr 13th, 2013

Hello I'm Agent Smith and I want to read your stories so send me a story if you can and I'll rate it so if you have a story that you want send me the story or you can just send me a message declaring the name of the story and I'll read it.

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Apr
13th
2013

New critic review. · 1:50am Apr 13th, 2013

I read a story called "Dimond Tiara likes minecraft" I liked the story I'd like to hear from other bronies what you thought or think of this story. I find that I like it for the fact that Dimond Tiara gets a unqiue talk from Chiralee that must be imbasrissing for Chiralee and how Sweetie Belle gets treated by Dimond Tiara in this fanfiction. Is great don't want to give away any spoilers so dialogue gets a C- the ponies gets a B- and the attude gets a B+ so overall it gets an A- look

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Apr
11th
2013

Story fixed · 8:56pm Apr 11th, 2013

CMC foalsitter has finally been approved just some problom with wall text but it's fixed now : )

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Apr
10th
2013

No stories approved · 8:59pm Apr 10th, 2013

BlueShift sent me a message saying CMC foalsitter was denide because of wall text :(

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