Review · 4:03am Apr 17th, 2013
I looked at a story called "my little staring contest, Alicorns can stare for a very long time" it was nothing like the others it was creative. The story is about the princesses of day and night having a staring contest for a muffin. Quite strange the dialoge was a little funny at times I do have to bring up. It is made by CosmicAfro that was my first story I read from him and I liked it. The dialoge I give it an C- because of the attude of the story it felt very off on Celesta's side Luna's was almost perfect. The idea I'll give a B+ only because it's his own idea not some other person's idea. Lastly the story I give a C- it felt odd never hooked you in fact the chapters were a little very little bit thought of CosmicAfro had an athor's note saying he didn't fully make it some of his friends helped. I'm not saying it's a bad story but it certainly isn't my first choice, but meny people have different thoughts on favorite stories so comment send me a message about what fanfiction to read as long as it's mot romance, they can't be ether of those out of the picture big time but others are just fine so like humen, or adventure are okay with me.
I might be odd but I've never seen a brony that posts reviews