review three- Scootaloo is slightly flame retardent · 8:48pm Apr 27th, 2013
Hello everypony it's me again, doing my first comady review. This story is by a person Dontwannaknow it's called Scootaloo is slightly flame retardent it's a story on how Scootaloo got a cutie mark however it's not what she expected. How it started off was odd Rarity most likely pacing around a waiting room. So the story get's an A- for it's creativity it wasn't perfact but it's a start. The speech/description was awsome that deserves an C- the fact you decided to put in real words was okay but not as appeling. Over all this story gets an A because of it's creativity is that is fair. I know other bronies like other types of fanfics and I respect that, but I just won't read anything that is romance or horror, so no horror or romances please I will not tolorate that.