review four- Reading mommy's books. · 1:16am May 3rd, 2013
Hello everypony as normal I'm Humane Chaos doing another review. This story is called Reading mommy's books by articunos bitch, this fanfic is a vary stange one. The time plot is while Luna and Celesta were only fillies, persanally I like that he added a lisp to Luna, it may have made it hard to read but it is quite funny. The story is that their mother left for a while, so they decided to read a story from the top shelf which was said to be off limets. The lot gets an B+ because I like how he used his own idea to some extent granted he used something from another fanfiction, called our days but that doesn't matter it is the first story I favorited actually. The persanality of all the ponies was funny and original that gets a solid A- only because he didn't totally rip off a fanfiction. This is honestly the first story that that gets an A so shout out to articunos bitch great job great fanfic cheak it out if you want, and send me your review and remember send me requests that are not horror or romance. I'll see you later everypony adios.