2451255 Thanks for the advice. I wrote this on the fly without much thought going into editing, so it's more or less slapped together haphazardly. I hope you can bear my sloppy editing long enough to enjoy the story.
Another great chapter. I'm really getting into this fic. Glad you updated so quickly not sure how long I could've waited XD so many fics take forever to update so this was a nice surprise keep on going.
2455999 No, sorry. I added Pinkie and Twi as tags because they're secondary characters, but I seem to be confusing people. I'll remove the character tags if they don't have any action.
Friggin amazing man! I wish that I had talent like this! My charicters always have spiraling relationships, THIS IS AWESOME!!! Like I said before, amazing charicter development!
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Thanks for the advice. I wrote this on the fly without much thought going into editing, so it's more or less slapped together haphazardly. I hope you can bear my sloppy editing long enough to enjoy the story.
2454569 's all good bra. This chapter was much better
Another great chapter. I'm really getting into this fic. Glad you updated so quickly not sure how long I could've waited XD so many fics take forever to update so this was a nice surprise keep on going.
Great chapter!
Please tell me this story also has twipie, the subtle hints are killing me
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No, sorry. I added Pinkie and Twi as tags because they're secondary characters, but I seem to be confusing people. I'll remove the character tags if they don't have any action.
Friggin amazing man! I wish that I had talent like this! My charicters always have spiraling relationships, THIS IS AWESOME!!! Like I said before, amazing charicter development!
Well... I'm glad I decided to read this story. It's actually quite interesting, if a little fast paced.
besides pinkie almost burning down canterlot that made me laugh so hard