Never Cry Flutterwolf

by thatguynamedaxel

4

Rainbow dash was upset she had just got bitten by a wolf
it took a while before Twilight conviced her that wolf was Fluttershy.

When Rainbow dash was finaly convinced she flew away
she hid in her cloud house.

She cried for

After a few minnutes her sadness was interupted.

"Shes your freind" said a voice.

"Whos there?" asked Rainbow Dash

"Why dont you go and apoligize?" asked the voice.

Rainbow snaped and threw a book at the direction of the voice
screaming "SHES A WOLF!"

"Ow." Said the voice.

"Who are you?" Asked Rainbow Dash.

The voice was reviled to be Mornig Arrow.

Rainbow Dash was to upset to wonder why a earth pony chould be up in her cloud house.

"Go help her." Said Morning Arrow"

Rainbow Dash flew away.

Meenwhile

Flutershy had fled deep into the Everfree Forest.

Fluttershy had not eaten for almost a day and she was hungry.

She saw a rabbit.

"Food." Said a voice from within her
All at once Fluttershy lost control and cloulor faded from the world
she lost all feeling

"No..." Thought Fluttershy as she faded away.

All that was fluttershy was traped deep within the wolf.
The wolf iteslf enjoyed the meal unaware at what it used to be,
Flutershy was gone but not completly.

Rainbow Dash was in the forest looking for Fluttershy.

"Fluttershy!?" "Fluttershy where are you?"
Shouted Rainbow Dash

Rainbow Dash was upset at hereself she knew that she had to help fluttershy.

She saw Fluttershy or at least what was left of her,
the creature ahead was coverd in blood with long sharp teeth and claws
Rainbow dash wanted to look away, she wanted to run!
But her legs and wings were locked in place.

The wolf that was once Fluttershy did not see anything else but prey when it looked at Rainbow Dash
it lunged.

Rainbow dash was bitten but all she did was try to make fluttershy remeber who she was

"Fluttershy its me" said Rainbow Dash

The wolf just stared a soul percing glare at Rainbow Dash.

Other wolfs appered behind Fluttershy.

Rainbow Dash still tried to make Fluttershy remeber who she was

"Thats the stare Fluttershy... You use that when the animals dont liston to you. dont you remeber Angel?
Dont you rember me? Said Rainbow Dash

All at once Fluttershy awoken.

Rainbow Dash chould not stay awake for long after that. The last thing she remberd was Fluttershy trying to save her
Rainbow Dash fell down and fainted.
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later.
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Rainbow Dash awoke in the Emergency room.

Twilight explained that Fluttershy had draged her back to town and then she ran back to her cottage.

Still nopony knew who had done this to Fluttershy
or even how to reverse it.

Author's Note:

this was edited from the DA version

it was made longer and more stuff was added

Comments

[thatguynamedaxel]

2446863
what needs editing?

[StoneButterflies]

2450482 There's a lot of closely repeated words, and the story goes by fast, so it seems a little rushed. As well, there's some spelling errors.

[thatguynamedaxel]

2452177
examples?