>Looking forward to seeing what Twilight is like now >Deenergized >Not devoted minion >Don't get to see Applejacks fall
On the upside, you certainly know how to set the stage, so I'm hoping there's some grand design in place, and I'll get to see some delightful corruption.
Only complaint is that it's a tad unclear why sex is a necessary part of the corruption. I can imagine some reasons, but I would eventually like details on what's being done to them. Twilight seems less corrupted and more drained of life (her only act so far was to warn a friend), but it's implied that was a mistake on his part somehow.
>Looking forward to seeing what Twilight is like now
![:rainbowhuh:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowhuh.png)
>Deenergized
>Not devoted minion
>Don't get to see Applejacks fall
On the upside, you certainly know how to set the stage, so I'm hoping there's some grand design in place, and I'll get to see some delightful corruption.![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
Seriously, amazing work. One of the best stories I've read in a while. Can't wait for Chapter 3!![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
Only complaint is that it's a tad unclear why sex is a necessary part of the corruption. I can imagine some reasons, but I would eventually like details on what's being done to them. Twilight seems less corrupted and more drained of life (her only act so far was to warn a friend), but it's implied that was a mistake on his part somehow.
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Never fear, there's plenty more to come. As Starbright said, Twilight was a mistake.
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Thanks a lot!
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Answers are forthcoming, sooner rather than later.