I dont normally read these types of fics but when i do it needs a good leadup and plot

i can see where this is going

huh

I must say, I honestly Like how this was done, I find Fanfics more engaging with there is some grammar and wording there. Not that I'm knocking anyone's skill level, I know I'm not the best. Just saying, its hard to really get into a story when its "so and so gets up, so and so then does this" I love the wording that lets your mind visualize the scene, the place, the action. Kudos I say to you, Kudos. Look forward to reading more of your work.

Not a fan of clop, but the writing in the first part's good and there's something of a background and story behind it, so I'll give it a like.

My heart is full of daaawww.

this is cute and strange

“Relax and forget about Verdant, I’m sure it ain’t that bad. You just gotta earn their respect first.”

"They just assaulted a Royal Guard, but we're going to ignore it."

Err, right...