The lulz they hurt
So the feedback I got on this so far is good and thought I’d see what I could do about that.
Four creatures stood hidden in the prompt room at the Townsville news station. A tall human clad in green armor guards the door. His unmovable form a wall against all that would oppose. Over by the window leading to the announcers booth a short mustachioed man wearing his signature red cap, His gaze never leaving the figure in the next room. At the desk in the middle of the room sat alone human at a desk a normal man in almost every way except the insane glint in his eye as he typed away at the computer before him breaking through firewall after firewall to mess with the prompt. Behind the human stood an alicorn her starry blue mane flowing behind her as she watches the human giggling to herself.
“Ah ha I cracked it” the human looks at his watch and smiles “and just in time” he quickly begins to type. After a few moments he laughs and looks over to watch what happens.
“And so once again, the day is saved thanks to...The Fierce Foursome." The Narrorator looks at the teleprompt then over to the room we are in laughing at him. He glares at us as he runs out of his booth and into the prompt room fuming. “who the hell are you and what did you do”
The human at the desk slowly stands before speaking “WE ARE THE FIERCE FOURSOME AND WE HAVE A QUESTION FOR YOU” the Narrorator looks around at the four beings in the room with him angrily.
“Well spit it out so I can go back to my announcing” he spits out. Meanwhile in the city of Townsville three girls are floating there looking bored while they wait for the Narrarator to get it right.
The Human looks behind himself at Luna and smirks “WE WHERE WONDERING, DO YOU LIKE BANNANAS” Mario smirks while master chief chuckles as the human walks up and stands before the Narrarator who looks confused.
“Well yes, but what does that have to do with anything” The human looks at him with a smile as he pulls not one, not two, not a bunch, but an entire bushel that thing you cut straight off the tree from behind his back and hands it to a very confused Narrorator and screams out.
“For the power of the great Bungledram” he throws his fist in the air as Luna flashes them to her secret castle just south of the crystal empire, leaving the Narrarator to break. The human looks over to the rest of the group and asks Luna “so what now”.
Luna raises her hoof to her chin and taps it “Pizza” she gives them a questioning look.The first to speak up is master chief.
“I’ll get the beer” he rips open the door and trudges out into the snow like its nothing. Mario looks after him and speaks up.
“I’ll go help him” He pulls out him parka and puts it on and begins to jump after master chief, sound effect and all. Luna begins to call the crystal pizza express.
2 hours later
They don’t really know what went wrong each of the four are drunk are eating a slice of cheese pizza out in the snow in front of the secret hideout. That’s on fire and some how in a giant block of ice at the same time. They all look at each other and burst out laughing speaking in between laughs.
“Where did we get a walrus” the human chokes out as he looks at the creature sitting next to him drinking a beer.
“How did we set the ice on fire” Mario looks at the burning ice trying to breath.
“Why is my armor a rainbow” Chief looks down at his multi hue armor racking his brain for an answer.
“Why do I have bunny ears” Luna chokes out while poking the ears. This continues for a short time until they stagger off to find there next adventure.
So somepone tell me what the hay I just wrote.
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First? Ok, i'll take it. Cool story bro
2417976 Thanks just me letting a little boredom and crazy out
2418012 Well, it works!
2418027 cool ill see if i can come up with some more stuff for it
This has no sense to it what so ever... WELL DONE!
To the folks that thumb down can ya give a reason please
This is what I'm doing right now
This is a crazy story and i like it keep writing more.(Thinks to self, 'How did they light ice no fire. Next thing I know a black hole could suck the secret fortress in.')
2429966 Thanks while i don't know about a black hole. but i'm thinking about a hangover type chapter next or i might have them fuck around in another world.