Maybe it would be best if new readers stayed away from the comments until they caught up all the way... thar be spoilers ahead!
Final solution? And with that the Steel Rangers go right off the slippery slope into goddamned Nazi territory. Nazi pony territory. Nazi ponies after the apocalypse territory. Brings back memories of Metro, funnily enough. Glad to see Raze is back, though with (a?) bomb(s) in him, his grandma held captive and severe magic derived burns.
Fate is cool too. Knowing Fallout she's gonna be dead soon because depression is fun!
Ever noticed how your description sounds like a bad joke?
"A scribe, a farmer, three spies, an inventor, a store clerk, a broken-hearted warrior and a bodyguard all walk into a bar. The bar explodes and everyone dies. The end."
3273946 Yeech. I'm always reminded of the Borg from Star Trek: despotism disguised as a form of communism. That kind of thing creeps me out.
Also, the actual idea of not being the only person in your own mind must be maddening.
Also, also: thank you so much for trying out the story, considering how many FO:E stories there are. I truly hope you enjoy unraveling the ball of half-working Christmas lights that is the plot.
I think Mister Rich there should just have someone catch Knight Shores and take her armor away. Then they can have a real conversation about the possible length of her remaining lifespan. Also, those idiots should leave the poor pegasi alone. They probably like it in their cozy mountain and I really don't think they're going to like being invaded or the steel rangers coming round. Raze should probably be a smart pony and get out of town asap.
Maybe it would be best if new readers stayed away from the comments until they caught up all the way... thar be spoilers ahead!
Final solution? And with that the Steel Rangers go right off the slippery slope into goddamned Nazi territory. Nazi pony territory. Nazi ponies after the apocalypse territory. Brings back memories of Metro, funnily enough. Glad to see Raze is back, though with (a?) bomb(s) in him, his grandma held captive and severe magic derived burns.
Fate is cool too. Knowing Fallout she's gonna be dead soon because depression is fun!
EDIT: Shouldn't Friendship City be capitalized?
A bit different from the other chapters but still good
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Sleepy Shores is a deceptive type. Maybe genocide is in the cards, maybe not.
Poor Raze. He just can't catch a break to save his life.
Fate's my favorite character. I really hope I don't do anything too terrible to her...
EDIT: Whatever do you mean, sir or madame? Friendship City is of course capitalized! I certainly wouldn't wirte a bnuch of tpyos, wlould I?
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This one does lay down some thick metaphor, huh? Leaves this chapter feeling a little soft. Thank you, though.
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Ever noticed how your description sounds like a bad joke?
"A scribe, a farmer, three spies, an inventor, a store clerk, a broken-hearted warrior and a bodyguard all walk into a bar. The bar explodes and everyone dies. The end."
I think Steelhooves would be proud of me.
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Just might have been inspired by a Pulp Fiction trailer I can't seem to find anymore...
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Yeech. I'm always reminded of the Borg from Star Trek: despotism disguised as a form of communism. That kind of thing creeps me out.
Also, the actual idea of not being the only person in your own mind must be maddening.
Also, also: thank you so much for trying out the story, considering how many FO:E stories there are. I truly hope you enjoy unraveling the ball of half-working Christmas lights that is the plot.
I think Mister Rich there should just have someone catch Knight Shores and take her armor away. Then they can have a real conversation about the possible length of her remaining lifespan. Also, those idiots should leave the poor pegasi alone. They probably like it in their cozy mountain and I really don't think they're going to like being invaded or the steel rangers coming round. Raze should probably be a smart pony and get out of town asap.