Chaos. Entropy. Discord. It goes by many names. Something happen at random other don't. This is true chaos and darkness. A single stallion has a curse shoved upon him yet he makes the best of it.
I like vampire fics, but due to how rushed this chapter is, the honestly below average writing, and the akward sudden love, I can't like this. I will continue reading, but only to see if this improves. Also, you BARELY described the surroundings.
Hmm, I like the start, but there quite a number of noticeable errors.![:twilightsheepish:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsheepish.png)
I like vampire fics, but due to how rushed this chapter is, the honestly below average writing, and the akward sudden love, I can't like this. I will continue reading, but only to see if this improves. Also, you BARELY described the surroundings.