The Price of Citizenship

by Colgate is best pony

Thanks and Coming Attractions

Over 70,000 words and 16 months later, and Citizenship is finally complete.
It has been a wild ride, and each step has been part of an incredible journey for me.
I want to thank all of you for your support throughout Applejack’s journey. I don’t want to name names so I don’t forget someone, but you guys know who you are. The support I received was incredible and I owe you all a debt of gratitude.

Thank you. Sincerely, from the bottom of my heart.

This story has gone in many different directions since I began it. I had no idea what I was getting myself into when I started, but I am glad that I took the challenge. It really was a pleasure to create something that was appreciated by others, and, again, I thank you all sincerely.

This will likely be the end of Applejack’s story, but not of mine. I have plans for my next tale (see below) but I will not be starting it for some time as I get the rest of my life (finding a job, graduating) on track.

Until then, I wish you all the best.
Thanks,
Colgate is best pony

COMING SOON:

The charmer. The boss. The brains. The sneak. The psycho. The rookie.

Six partners. Fifty million bits. One plan. A hundred ways for it to go wrong.

All before their owners notice that they’re gone.

Colgate is best pony presents:
Heist!
Summer 2014

Comments

[drone_r0m-3]

So a ponified version of Ocean's 11?

[Aatxe360]

Huzzah! Great ending to great story!

Applejack's a little too modest sometime.

[Colgate is best pony]

4244587 good catch. Gilda has been freed from her cell already, but will edit to clarify, and thank you!

4243426 thank you, and thanks for the support since then. Will edit those bits, good catches as always.

4241949 something like that. Not neccessarily "ponified", though. . .

[Dancewithknives]

I read the description and thought it sounded like Starship Troopers.

[Colgate is best pony]

4248901 that was the original inspiration for writing the story. I re-read the book before attempting it. The plot evolves away from that theme a bit as the story progresses though.

[Dancewithknives]

4249755 wait, book? So there's no neil patrick harris?

[Colgate is best pony]

4249847 haha as much as I wanted him involved he sadly declined. The film (which I love) is very unlike the book- both were certainly influences on the story though. The book more so though, at least in the beginning.