The Sound of Angels

by Shining Eyes

The Dead One

The Sound of Angels

By: Shining Eyes

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One day, Shining Eyes was walking a hiking trail

when suddenly, a glimpse of a sillouhette caught his

eye. He turned around and found nothing. He kept

walking. A few minutes later, he felt a cool breeze

through his mane. He turned around again and again,

nothing. "...What the hell is going on here?" he

asked, curious and somewhat afraid. He kept on

walking, considering to just go home and take a nap.

It was getting dark, anyways. So, he turned around

and was met with a pony around his size, with no

mane or tail, a coat which was colored to look like

he was wearing a suit, and no face. "Hello." The

corporeal figure said in a ghostly tone. Shining

Eyes was frozen in place, filled with fear. "...Wh-

Who are you...?" The moment he said that, he felt a

sharp object go through his abdomen and he collapsed

to the ground. When he woke up, he was laying in a

hospital bed, where a doctor and 3 nurses were

huddled around the doorway. "..What happend to

me...?" he called out, but nopony seemed to hear

him. "I asked what happened to me!" he called out in

a louder voice. Still, nopony heard him. He then

looked to his right, to his horror, to see the life

support system turned off. He suddenly felt lighter

and lifted off the ground slightly. He had realized

what happened. He didn't understand it, but he rised

slightly more off the ground. He heard angels

singing, welcoming him into the heavens, and he rose

and rose until he though he could rise no higher,

and touched down on a cloud, right infront of the

gates of heaven. [POLICE REPORT. 12/22/2298]

[Victim's name: Shining 'Escongea' Eyes][Cause of

death: Stabbed to death. Victim was last seen

venturing into the Whitetail Wood at 2:45 P.M.]

[Estimated Time of Death: 5:43 P.M.] [POLICE REPORT

END]

Comments

[Dash Aradele]

whoa.

[Dash Aradele]

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