Thanks, I really do appreciate any feedback on any of my work. That chapter 2 was inspired by a discussion where I commented that I'd dedicate a lot to wings if Twilight had any, and somehow I got the idea for Alicorn Twilight. Things just went from there.
Expect future additions to stray away from clop, this is wish-fulfillment at its core. Just lots and lots of sappy waifu fantasies.
The part when they both realize she will out live him and the ending made me sad But I'm curious of what will happen next and I really enjoy the other chapters showing us their whole/past relationship in detail
P.S. That guy is awesome for pleasing and loving Twilight so much...
Twilight had already spent a few years here in Ponyville, under orders from Princess Celestia to learn of the 'magic of friendship'. For what purpose was revealed some time ago, as her fate as successor to the throne was thrust upon us. She could not rule as a mere unicorn, the magic that she had learned over the years would be used to transform her into an alicorn, a perfect fusion of the three pony castes.
Holy shit on a shit sandwich with shit on top... And side of shit, that was a lucky guess because that is more or less what Hasbro is doing for the final episode.
134010 Awww... No wet mane Twilicorn? Yeah, I did read that she's in the shower/ tub, but describing Twilight with a wet mane would have improved the story, in my opinion. Something to keep in mind (or add should you rewrite/ re-edit the story)
I second that.
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Thanks, I really do appreciate any feedback on any of my work. That chapter 2 was inspired by a discussion where I commented that I'd dedicate a lot to wings if Twilight had any, and somehow I got the idea for Alicorn Twilight. Things just went from there.
Expect future additions to stray away from clop, this is wish-fulfillment at its core. Just lots and lots of sappy waifu fantasies.
Personally, I don't like alicorn Twilight either, but different strokes for different folks.
The emotional intimacy was fantastic. I adored this one.
Wow, I'm impressed. This is a really great story so far.
And, just to note, this isn't really aiming at a connected series of chapters, anything new I add would probably be episodic.
This is awesome. So tender. I'd favourite it if I could figure out where the damn fave button is on this site.
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So, there won't be full-on penetration?
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Uh, there already has been.
Though there may or may not be a part dedicated to all kinds of fetishes in the future
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Oh... must have overread that...
Did she drink red bull? Red bull gives you Wiiiings!
The part when they both realize she will out live him and the ending made me sad But I'm curious of what will happen next and I really enjoy the other chapters showing us their whole/past relationship in detail
P.S. That guy is awesome for pleasing and loving Twilight so much...
I WANNA BE HIM!!!!!!!
Holy shit on a shit sandwich with shit on top... And side of shit, that was a lucky guess because that is more or less what Hasbro is doing for the final episode.
Beautiful
Still not going to say it Caboose.
134010 Awww... No wet mane Twilicorn? Yeah, I did read that she's in the shower/ tub, but describing Twilight with a wet mane would have improved the story, in my opinion. Something to keep in mind (or add should you rewrite/ re-edit the story)
"among"
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Among us
Well, magic is a thing. So any of the princesses can make MC immoral. So that's no biggie. He can rule as King/Prince along side Twi.