The next test looked simple enough. Climb up to the ledge, shoot a portal at another tilted ledge, and shoot a portal directly under you, and you get shot to a ledge right above you. Sadly, Rarity was having problems figuring that out.
"Um, not to be rude, but you are taking an awfully long time, and I would like to try." Fluttershy said.
"No! I've got it."
Ten minutes later.
"Cmon Rarity, I want to get to the surprise already!" Pinkie whined.
"No, I told you I've got it!"
Twenty minutes later.
Twilight yanked the portal gun out of Rarity's hoof, and completed the test in under ten seconds.
"Oh. Yes, I knew that..." Rarity said and followed Twilight.
"Your friend is a bit on the stupid side." GLaDOS stated.
"Shut up!"
"She's ugly too." Rarity immediately stopped.
"What did you say?"
"U-G-L-Y you ain't got no alibi you ugly!" Rarity looked like she was about to faint.
"Isn't that a song?" Twilight asked but nopony answered.
"Well, do you want to know what I think?" Rarity asked GLaDOS.
"No."
"I think that you are a lousy, good for nothing jerk, who is mean to others because she has no life or friends. If I remember correctly, you deleted your only friend. In fact, you are just making all of those things up to get on our bad side! Well i'm not falling for it, so now you have another pony who wants you dead. So good job." Rarity told her.
"She's my new favorite pony." Wheatly said. Rarity smiled.
"Apply cool water to burned area." Rainbow joked.
"This calls for a: Rarity just dissed GLaDOS party!" Pinkie cheered.
"Haha, GLaDOS is like an apple tree that just got bucked in the face!" Applejack told them.
"ALL OF YOU SHUT UP!" GLaDOS roared.
"Good job girls! You made GLaDOS lose it." Twilight told them.
"Please... Just continue on to the next test chamber for your surprise." GLaDOS told them.
"Okie doki loki!" Pinkie said and skipped through the door, and the others followed. As they entered the next room, the ceiling opened up, and a pony fell from it. A light orange pony with a black mane.
"Well, this is awkward." Wheatly said.
"Who is that?" Fluttershy asked him.
"DUH! It's Chell!" Pinkie answered for him.
"Yes, what the pink one said." Wheatly confirmed.
"I foud her sneaking around the old testing chambers. I guess she just really likes testing." GLaDOS said, making Chell frown.
"Well, at least we have a professional tester here now." Twilight said, and Chell face-hoofed.
"Before we continue testing, I think Wheatly has something to say to Chell." Fluttershy said.
"What?"
"You know, at the end of Portal 2, you said that if you ever see her again, you would apologize." Pinkie told him.
"Oh."
"Yea."
"Right now?"
"YES!"
"Well i'm sorry, but I feel bloody stupid."
"Well i'm sure no one likes admitting that they went crazy, but i'm sure it will all work out."
"That isn't helping!" Wheatly told the pink pony. Chell tapped her hoof on the floor impatiently. "All right fine. I'm sorry. I'm sorry I was mean, and monstrous, and I was just like HER. I am truly sorry."
"Awww, thank you for finally opening up to us!" Fluttershy congratulated him.
"Chell, do you accept his apology?" Applejack asked. The light orange pony nodded.
"Good, now that we are all friends again, it's time to complete this test. So if you don't mind..."
"Yea, yea hold your... something, GLaDOS." Pinkie said. "Let's go, everypony and... whatever Wheatly is!"
Ohhhh, I hate reading unfinished fanfics, but I just NEED to read this. I'll be back when I'm done!
Ok, the story is good, but the way it written, it seems to go a bit too... fast.
Things just happen to quickly.
Also, I didn't really get this bit. ' "I think I can answer that." Rainbow said. She cleared her throat. "He probably drifted too close to Equestria's atmosphere, and fell. As to how he survived that fall? HE'S MAGICAL!" '
But the story is good, I'm currently doing a Portal/Pony fic too. Good job!
this might be kind've a problem because if chell survived and is still there then something is not right
but its still pretty good
1832193 How is something not right if Chell survived? At the end of Portal 2 GLaDOS let Chell go, because she was too hard to kill.
yes but why is she back in the facility
in the end she leaves for good>>1833146
in the end of the game to be exact
1833189 How can i explain what I was thinking? For the ponies, it's an alternate universe, and for the Portal characters they were teleported there for no real reason, and Chell just happened to be teleported to Celestia science. Make sense? Doesn't quite make sense to me...
1833221 if it doesn't make sense to you it doesn't make sense at all
but ok then whatever you say
ps. make ratman appear
1833297 ratman???
you know the guy who freed shell and was the origonal test subject
if you didn't know look him up on youtube type in
portal 2 ratman 1833391
1833406 1. If by guy, you mean Wheatly?
2. you spelled Chell, shell.
1833422 thanks for telling me about my mispells and when say guy i mean a human not that wheatley i literally mean an actual living human
he is also a rumor in portal 1& 2 where you can find his secret dens
1833437 OH! You mean the 'cake is a lie' guy.
1833458 now your getting who im talking about
>> :D Maybe I will include him. But idk.
1831633 Fast? The Sonic Rainboom is fast! Sorry, was thinking about that all day.
Head should roll if not this is dissapointing
ahhahahahahahahahahahahahhahahhaahahh damn it chell