I like this fic althought it is going down too fast for me.There are things like
Chief got up and shot some rounds at the Promethean but, it continuously dodged it. As it jumped at John, he ducked and rolled out of the way. He turned and shot more bullets at it. It backed up and charged again. Again, Chief dodged again and slashed across the mid stomach of the Promethean
with too much agains and dodges.And you could use more names for him than just chief.Like the Spartan, Supersoldier , John, Sierra 117 ,The Demon (out of the perspective of a Elite) ...etc. As i said, i like this fic so i am already waiting for the next chapter.
Ok, You need to give us a warning when you jump settings like that.
I could not tell when one setting ended and the next began.
Yay finally the first chapter :)
I almost forgot about this fic.![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
So, is this before or after the Didact got all pissy with dash?
2435317 what do you mean?
DIDACT IS DEAD THAT WAS A KNIGHT
2435517 The Prologue
I like this fic althought it is going down too fast for me.There are things like
with too much agains and dodges.And you could use more names for him than just chief.Like the Spartan, Supersoldier , John, Sierra 117 ,The Demon (out of the perspective of a Elite) ...etc.![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
As i said, i like this fic so i am already waiting for the next chapter.