Wow i ate that story up like a fat-free, calorie-free chocolate cake. Naw I'm kidding. I'd eat it with the sugar and fat anyway . One thing here; "timid one told Tunderlane about hers." Missed an H. AJ's homophobia was entertaining enough but was a kind of weird compared to all of the game she gets in other clop stories. "Yeah, she would be walkin’ funny for at least the rest of the day." Best line.
2313204 Thank you. I fixed the "Tunderlane" error as soon as I read your comment. Sorry you didn't quite enjoy Applejack's homophobia, but it is a plot point that will still be relevant for future chapters.
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Whoops! Sorry about that, I didn't notice it was still unpublished. It's visible now, though.
great chapter
Wow i ate that story up like a fat-free, calorie-free chocolate cake. Naw I'm kidding. I'd eat it with the sugar and fat anyway .
One thing here; "timid one told Tunderlane about hers." Missed an H.
AJ's homophobia was entertaining enough but was a kind of weird compared to all of the game she gets in other clop stories.
"Yeah, she would be walkin’ funny for at least the rest of the day." Best line.
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Thank you. I fixed the "Tunderlane" error as soon as I read your comment.
Sorry you didn't quite enjoy Applejack's homophobia, but it is a plot point that will still be relevant for future chapters.
I see what you did there. Shadow of the Collossus refrence i pesume?