(Joke) Alt. Title: Thirty Two Chapters About PonyVille Sex

A story about shipping with the title "Untold Tales?" Oh yeah, because shipping is a pretty new thing in this fandom that I've never seen before. And it's gay shipping too!? Somebody sure is bold. Goodness, sex as well!? I can't take it, the boat is rocking too hard!

(No offense, it's just not my thing. Haven't read the story, so I'm not saying it's bad. Not gonna give you a thumbs down, I'm not like that.)

Kinda skipped the whole sex thing but other than that it was pretty good!

1810583 Honestly, I'm not terribly happy with the title either. I was having a lot of trouble coming up with one that didn't sound like "A Bunch of Ponies Have Sex, Hurr Durr," so I chose the most interesting sounding title I could think of, even if it didn't fit perfectly.

Sweet Celestia! Fifty-one views, eight likes, and five favorites in less than two hours?! You guys are awesome! Thanks!

Oh this was nice even a fit fast but I'm still really looking foward to see what will happen next.

1810965

Well, it's Twishy, so it's good enough for me.

Good story, though it does feel like they rushed into things too quickly. A little more buildup would've been nice, but it's your story, and I'm interested in where you're taking this.

I liked it, nice and cute Fluttershy trying to confess to Twilight and that inner voice thing didn't get too distracting like some stories I've seen. Now I just hope that whatever quagmire results from this, that Twilight and Fluttershy stay together and not cheat on each other in anyway.

1810456YOU EVIL TROLL! I WANT MOAR CLOP!i0.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/newsfeed/000/148/295/34588%20-%20clop%20computer%20rainbow_dash.jpg?1310666333

1811394
Fine, next time there will 838 films... And each will be two hours long!

1811401

That escalated quickly... However, it was good! I don't think I saw any mistakes, so that was nice. I can't wait to see the next chapter! The inner dialogue with Fluttershy was pretty funny, too.

Edit: Actually, I found a couple of things.

Should I ask her is she wants to, you know?

Should be 'if.'

I guess taht means you go first.

Should be 'that.'

1816287 Thanks for pointing those edits out, and I'm glad you liked it! I think the chapter might feel rushed due to both me focusing more on the plot (the narrative one) than the clop, and my own inexperience at writing, but I'll definitely keep pacing more in mind for later chapters.

1817406

*thump up + follow* good work.
Avoiding Heavy Words, seems to be quite unusually in this FanFic Side, even if it is a really recommended thing, so the Story will sound smooth and well chosen (about words).
You have chosen very well, avoiding the heaviest words and make it sound like a Lovestory and not like a Clopstory.

A very good read. Keep up the good work and cant wait till the next chapter comes out

This was a decent one shot so I'd go ahead and put it complete. If you do eventually update it let me know.

2252560 There is a second chapter as of this very hour! Just thought I'd let you know.

2289731
Um, where? It's not showing up the only chapter I see is Fluttershy's Secret.

tried reading the heartbroken chapter and it seams to be password blocked ... why?