Sorry I'm late gentlemen, I got held up in Epsilon Eridani...
Yep. That's all I've got to say about this chapter, yep. That and you need to go back through this chapter and fix the indentations at the beginning of your paragraphs, as many of them are non-functional. I am assuming that you uploaded this from Gdocs?
2406106 Nope even when cpoying and pasting straight from a word document it still screws with the formatting of the paragraphs. Also 'bout time ya showed up I thought a bunch of Drones carried you away and ate you for dinner.
Gosh dang it! When will the Prometheans come in? That's the second time they've been referenced, so that must mean soon right?
2371905 All in do time my friend all in do time.
2372796 Gooooooood
2373125 good to see that your partly pleased.
2374146 Partly? Me gusta this story.
2374434 Good to hear, good to hear. Any comment, questions, concerns about the story, always looking for input.
Entire comments section for this chapter is a two person conversation, and now one comment. Blarg blarg honk.
2377567 I am surprised, I was expecting more of a turnout for Chapter 7.
Sorry I'm late gentlemen, I got held up in Epsilon Eridani...
Yep. That's all I've got to say about this chapter, yep.
That and you need to go back through this chapter and fix the indentations at the beginning of your paragraphs, as many of them are non-functional. I am assuming that you uploaded this from Gdocs?
2406106 Nope even when cpoying and pasting straight from a word document it still screws with the formatting of the paragraphs. Also 'bout time ya showed up I thought a bunch of Drones carried you away and ate you for dinner.
2406282 Nope. They did and they tried, but then they died of exposure to my pure awesomeness!
Huh, I've never had issues copying from Word (2003)... Anyways, it should be an easy enough fix (if you haven't done it yet...)
2408531 I think it is word 2012 not sure have to check.