Spec ops, murdered out, active camo, sniper, up in a tree just watching. Reporting everything that's happening? I'm trying to help hive ya filler. I'm having trouble with it in my story right now.
I found one problem though... You put: "Michael, my name is Micheal." I filled in as I began to remove my armor. The problem with this sentence is bolded. A Spartans armor wieghs half a ton and needs specialized scientists and tools to have it removed. (Watch after the end credits of Halo 4, in a cinematic, where Cheif gets his armor removed.)
1847813 Rouge specialization, This allows the spartan to remove the armor with out a team of scientist, plus if you get the attitude of the squad we are not exactly by the book kind of people.
wait the new system for the comments means i can't have first always...
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1844571 XD, fimfiction.net said nope
Damn good story, you know you gotta get an EVA Spartan on that planet though ;)
1844824 Another spartan ops on Eqeustria......? damn it ONI.
Spec ops, murdered out, active camo, sniper, up in a tree just watching. Reporting everything that's happening? I'm trying to help hive ya filler. I'm having trouble with it in my story right now.
Give*
1844870 Ah I see
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1845463 Brace yourself because I don't have any f**ks to give. XD
1845463 Plus what makes you think that its going to be that bad?
Love the story!
I found one problem though... You put: "Michael, my name is Micheal." I filled in as I began to remove my armor.
The problem with this sentence is bolded. A Spartans armor wieghs half a ton and needs specialized scientists and tools to have it removed. (Watch after the end credits of Halo 4, in a cinematic, where Cheif gets his armor removed.)
1847813 Rouge specialization, This allows the spartan to remove the armor with out a team of scientist, plus if you get the attitude of the squad we are not exactly by the book kind of people.
1848512 That makes sense...
And I think you meant "Rogue specialization"?
1852108 Well ya but my computer decided to spell for me. I swear this thing is out to get me.
He told them about EARTH!!!! That goes DIRECTLY AGAINST the Cole Protocol, which disobeying is considered TREASON!!!