• Published 16th Nov 2012
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Asio and Thunder Flare visit equestria - Thunder Flare



well its my first piece of writing and unfinished

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The party begins!

We woke up after a long day and went down stairs, our cottage was quaint but not small, my stomach gurgled and so did Night Writers.
“Thunder Flare can we go get some food?” Night Writer asked

“No we don’t have any bits, remember.”

“Oh yeah.” he looked sad

“Cheer up maybe we can work for some bits and get some food.” I tried to sound encouraging

“NOOOOOO I’M NOT DOING THAT EVER AGAIN!” Night Writer wailed he slumped down and covered his face with his hooves

“Come on get up we should get going now and see if we can get another job there.”and with that we left the cottage and headed down to Sweet Apple Acres after an hour of working Night Writer was already complaining about too much work for two ponies. We walked back to Sugarcube Corner which Night Writer was excited about for two reasons, One; he wanted food particularly sweets, and two; he wanted to meet Pinkie Pie. Night Writer was infatuated with Pinkie Pie, We passed by two fillies and they snickered at us and yelled

“Blank flanks!” and walked away, I looked behind at my flank it was blank, Night Writer did the same he showed an expression of disappointment.

“Guess Princess Celestia wanted us to find our special talents like everypony else then, huh Thunder Flare?” He said letting out a sigh.

“We’re here.” I broke an awkward silence Night Writer ran inside the front door of the building the doors a bell rang signaling a customer had entered, Night Writer was already at the front counter bouncing up and down,

“What can i get you today?” Mr.Cake asked Night Writer

“Can i see Pinkie Pie?!” he was excited and you could hear it in his voice

“Well she’s not here at the moment but she will be back later.” He smiled I walked up and ordered ourselves two slices of cake, chocolate cake with whipped cream and strawberries on top; it looked delicious, Mr.Cake handed us the two cakes and we sat down at a pink wooden table inside the store I just slammed my face into the cake and the table shook. Night Writer looked at me and looked like he just didn’t know what to say in response to that. Night Writer picked up the cake carefully with his left forehoof and slowly brought it to his muzzle and carefully tried to eat it. We ate the cake and left I had frosting all over my muzzle; I looked like an idiot. He told me to wipe it off as we headed back to our cottage, and as we were heading back we ran into another pony, a mare, her mane was poofy and pink. She looked right at us silent for a moment, then she started talking extremely fast and I saw Night Writer out of the corner of my eye he had the biggest grin on his face; the pony we had run into was Pinkie Pie. I caught a few words like “Party” and “At Sweet Apple Acres” and at “7:00 p.m” and something about how she threw a party for all the new ponies in ponyville so they could make friends and get to know other people, with that she took off running a dust cloud left in her place where she was standing.

“Ok......” I looked at Night Writer and he was ecstatic

“Yay!” He shouted as he bounced into the air.

We arrived back at our small little cottage and went in to relax, but, not two minutes after we get inside a loud knock is heard from our door, I walked over to the door and opened it up to see a tall white stallion with golden armor and a blue mane and tail at our door; I froze up, thinking we did something wrong Night Writer walked over and the stallion introduced himself

“I am one of the royal guards from Canterlot Castle,” he paused and looked at the now un-petrified me “I have come to deliver a message from Princess Celestia,” he cleared his throat “Thunder Flare and Night Writer, I Celestia have told my student Twilight Sparkle about the two of you, she wants to meet you two tomorrow at her tree i’m sure she will want to know where you two came from, don’t tell her about your where you are actually from, Sincerely Princess Celestia.” and with that he left after we nodded our heads.

“I’ve been so worn out since the moment we got here.” I sighed

“Me too.” Night Writer agreed and just flopped down. I flew into my room and dropped onto the soft, plush bed and went to sleep.


Night Writer woke me up at 6:50 and said we had to go, i was still groggy and didn’t really want to get up and I had almost forgotten about the party, I knew he wasn’t going to let me miss it so i got up and finally we left. As we headed down to Sweet Apple Acres I noticed that Ponyville was practically empty, all the stores were closed and everypony was gone, it was eerie and very creepy. When we finally made it to Sweet Apple Acres I looked and saw that every tree that had apples on it this morning were bucked clean, only the green leaves and brown bark were left. When we reached the barn I saw a note on the barn door that said “Come in!” and i thought that was peculiar, I pushed open the big red barn door and we were greeted with a huge “SURPRISE!” from every pony in Ponyville! This was a massive party and Pinkie Pie ran up to us and started asking us

“Did we get ya?” she was very hyper, “Did we?” she had the biggest smile I’d ever seen on anyponies face.

“Hi Pinkie!” Night Writer said, I just decided to leave them alone and walked away and went to the food table, I saw all kinds of colorful things to eat and drink. I saw candied apples, and sugar cookies, and cake all looking so delicious, I just smiled and dug in. After a while another pegasus approached me she had a rainbow colored mane and rainbow colored tail, I immediately knew it was the one and only Rainbow Dash. I started to talk

“Rainbow Dash!” she looked at me weird

“How do you know my name?” I thought for a moment, crap I shouldn’t have done that.

“Who doesn't know the greatest flier in Equestria!” I smiled hoping she’d buy my bluff.

“Haha, yeah i guess you’re right.” she smiled

“You want to race?” I looked at her she looked like she was gonna laugh

“You really wanna race me?” “Fine, i’ll humor you,” she said “We’ll race.” I smiled and we walked outside of the barn, she turned to me and said “First one to make it around the farm wins.” I nodded, and swallowed the lump in my throat. “Ready?” she announced “Set!” “Go!” and we took off, she was way ahead of me, so i tried to speed up, faster, I thought, then outta nowhere my wings just stopped flapping completely. I fell and slammed into a tree, my face hurt so much, Rainbow Dash flew over and just started laughing, “You really were fast there for a second, almost caught up with me!” she smiled and helped me off the ground, i rubbed my face with my hoof, “Maybe, just maybe i’ll give you flight lesson, since it doesn't look like you know how to fly too well.” now I smiled and was trying not to jump up and down. We walked back to the barn and the party had just ended, Night Writer was happy, and every other pony was tired. We said goodbye to everypony and started to head back home

“That was fun.” I said to Night Writer

“I saw you leave with Rainbow Dash.” sarcasm in his voice, I smiled and we left.