That's odd, I didn't get any kind of notification that you left a reply.
I'm actually not a proofreader (too busy with other things), but I try to be helpful by pointing out mistakes and leaving tips when I can (especially if it's a story I'm interested in).
As for having trouble catching some of the mistakes I mentioned? That's really not surprising. It's been shown again and again that most people have trouble spotting their own mistakes, even if they have little trouble spotting mistakes in another person's writing. For this case, the usual advice is to read what you're looking at out loud to yourself. When you read silently, you tend to automatically fix mistakes when you notice them without even realizing it, meaning they get left unnoticed. Reading out loud basically forces you to notice the mistakes, because when you see them and try to correct them automatically, it leads to a large interruption in the flow of reading. An example would be where I pointed out that you had repeated a word in a sentence. Reading it silently would lead you to correcting it in your head without you even thinking about it. Reading it out loud would interrupt your reading, because you either say it twice, or you stop because you notice it right before saying it.
I hope this helps. If you do want to find a proofreader, just type proofreader in the group search. There are several groups dedicated to providing help for authors, with many of the members being glad to help by proofreading.
"Go to therapy they said. It'll help they said. You won't end up strapped to a table in a room with a talking horse..." they always say that,but you always do end up like that....wasteland therapy is bullshit!*throws hat at wall*
2024350 no two of the only raise the lvl cap by 5
2036991
I honestly don't care. None of the characters actually know about the leveling up (besides maybe Pinkie) so it's trivial and unneeded.
2036997 fine
2037001 fine
the amount of fucks that she is not giving, so much empty space
2043103
Please expand on that, or I can't fix it.
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Are you, by chance, a proofreader? (never would have caught those)
2043153
I think that's just pointing out how little she seems to care that she is now talking to a colorful pony. With wings.
Of course, this is the protagonist from a Fallout game, so that's probably normal for her.
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Though I have no personal experience, I tend to think that I would hallucinate under those kinds of conditions.
But, yeah, the Courier's seen some shit.
2043327 I've seen some shit
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2043320 exactly
2043313
That's odd, I didn't get any kind of notification that you left a reply.
I'm actually not a proofreader (too busy with other things), but I try to be helpful by pointing out mistakes and leaving tips when I can (especially if it's a story I'm interested in).
As for having trouble catching some of the mistakes I mentioned? That's really not surprising. It's been shown again and again that most people have trouble spotting their own mistakes, even if they have little trouble spotting mistakes in another person's writing. For this case, the usual advice is to read what you're looking at out loud to yourself. When you read silently, you tend to automatically fix mistakes when you notice them without even realizing it, meaning they get left unnoticed. Reading out loud basically forces you to notice the mistakes, because when you see them and try to correct them automatically, it leads to a large interruption in the flow of reading. An example would be where I pointed out that you had repeated a word in a sentence. Reading it silently would lead you to correcting it in your head without you even thinking about it. Reading it out loud would interrupt your reading, because you either say it twice, or you stop because you notice it right before saying it.
I hope this helps. If you do want to find a proofreader, just type proofreader in the group search. There are several groups dedicated to providing help for authors, with many of the members being glad to help by proofreading.
2043517 I died .
2044743 I'm gonna revise all the chapters then. That said, it might be a while 'fore the next chapter though.
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Proofreaders and those Willing to Proofread
Here's the link to one of the groups I was talking about, in case you want to ask someone to proofread your story.
what happens when you go crazy on slasher and jet while drinking whisky?: you see colorful pony's talking to you
"Go to therapy they said. It'll help they said. You won't end up strapped to a table in a room with a talking horse..."
they always say that,but you always do end up like that....wasteland therapy is bullshit!*throws hat at wall*
i can't allmost wait for more