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Heavy...
Make Octy a lycan! It goes along well with Vinyl Vampire.
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Thanks for the comment, and it's always heartwarming to have a new reader! I hope you continue to enjoy Bon Hadescream, but it is not that grand old story My Roommate is a Vampire. I couldn't replicate what Dennis the Menace accomplished there even if I tried, so I'm following my heart. Lycans do have their place in the Bon Hadescream bestiary, but I don't see Octavia becoming one. If I might draw your eye back to an earlier chapter...
In this story, I try to depict Octavia as the "pinnacle mortālis", a mare who is still a mere mortal and has no true powers of her own. All she is, she owes to training or the gift Vinyl gave her because of their friendship. Contrast that with Vinyl, who was born with her powers and did not truly "earn" any of them! Octavia must have the courage to stand up against incredibly mighty monsters, one of which is her best friend, with only her wits and a will of cold iron. As cute as it is to see Octavia with puppy eyes and paws... I just feel that it would hurt the story more than help it.
Thank you for the feedback, though! Your little question has given me the opportunity to pull out a half-formed thought that has been lurking in my mind and commit it to text. I hope you'll continue to voice your thoughts on my work!
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"Heavy", but satisfactory, I hope? I tried to make Rollins' part sad, but not angst-ridden. As for Octavia, I've been waiting so very long to post that chunk. I wrote the prototype long ago, and have refined it several times. She is terrifying to contemplate, because while Vinyl might regard killing as recreation, Octavia gives the act the respect it deserves... and performs it with frightening haste.
It makes you wonder just which one is the "monster", mmm?
3969212 Umm..Tavi is ranking higher than Vinyl at the moment. And yes good heavy. I really do like your work.
3969212 what idea?
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Seeing as you're using heavy WH40K influence I have to ask are they Orks? Cause that would be kinda awesome and totally work.