What will happen when Spike spends an entire week all alone with the beautiful and kind Fluttershy?
I'd recommend that you merge chapters 2 and 3. They would fit better if read as a whole.
Short, but very sweet, enjoyable nonetheless
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Spike looked sadly town, and scratched his claw over the pillow slowly.
Town should be down
I'd recommend that you merge chapters 2 and 3. They would fit better if read as a whole.
Short, but very sweet, enjoyable nonetheless
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Town should be down