Before reading: Great, another My Little Dashie clone. After chapter 1: Yep, My Little Dashie clone for sure. After chapter 2: Dafuq? After chapter 3: Why did Tom throw her out then?! After chapter 4: I'm sleeping with a hammer!
There was several grammar errors including you failed to capitalize Pinkie and Tom MANY times. I liked what you did with Pinkies speech being red or pink depending on what side of her was talking.
not a grammar nazi, but I like this enough to definitely see where this goes........in a twisted sorta way I'd perfer to deal with pinkamena as I'm actually comfortable with her......>.>......long as she doesn't get "pointy" that is...
Not the worst, cant be bothered to do a full review tho
Before reading: Great, another My Little Dashie clone.
After chapter 1: Yep, My Little Dashie clone for sure.
After chapter 2: Dafuq?
After chapter 3: Why did Tom throw her out then?!
After chapter 4: I'm sleeping with a hammer!
There was several grammar errors including you failed to capitalize Pinkie and Tom MANY times. I liked what you did with Pinkies speech being red or pink depending on what side of her was talking.
Overall:
7/10 Scootaloos
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Im a turtle (BOOM!!)
not a grammar nazi, but I like this enough to definitely see where this goes........in a twisted sorta way I'd perfer to deal with pinkamena as I'm actually comfortable with her......>.>......long as she doesn't get "pointy" that is...