141589714162231416587 You've been on the internet for how long and you're still surprised by stuff? I think you should just quit the internet now and save the rest of us the whining.
ANYHOOF, I enjoyed it. May check the second chapter out, may not. I dunno. Could use some more of this though.
... this was a bit too dark for my liking. I dont condone pedophilia, even in such broad terms as this. This might, MIGHT, have potential, but could use some serious rethinking in a number of areas. Or maybe Im just being butthurt. Either way, the writing itself was well done.
ugh.......is wrong..............but... Applecest...is best incest XD damn, I liked it! specially because Futajack is my Festish! XD lol ...great storie! ....I gonna go so much to hell XD
>> Reik Would that special hell happen to be reserved for people who take sexual advantage of their hot wives they got while drunk and people who speak in the theater?
"You did a real great job today, sugercube." Applejack said softly later that night as the family relaxed around the dining table.
Should be sugarcube. Also that should be a comma afterwards. And while we're at it, this whole paragraph should be split up into at least two, maybe more.
She was getting uncomfortably close to the foal now. Applebloom felt slightly uncomfortable at her sister's words.
I'm sorry but what the fuck? How is your sister making sure you're knocked up better than having colts stare?
1409989 my thoughts exactly
MINDFUCK DETECTED. BEGIN CLEANSING IMMEDIATELY.
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I'm going under the assumption that the fic was in the area that the reaper blasted, right?
wat
the fuck did i just read. i mean really WHAT THE FUCK. i read some really weird shit but this... this is just. all i can say is WHAT THE FUCK.
ow my head
1415897 1416223 1416587 You've been on the internet for how long and you're still surprised by stuff? I think you should just quit the internet now and save the rest of us the whining.
ANYHOOF, I enjoyed it. May check the second chapter out, may not. I dunno. Could use some more of this though.
I've read worse.
This story is good because it insulted Braeburn. That is the only criterion upon which I judge stories.
... this was a bit too dark for my liking. I dont condone pedophilia, even in such broad terms as this. This might, MIGHT, have potential, but could use some serious rethinking in a number of areas. Or maybe Im just being butthurt. Either way, the writing itself was well done.
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@ Cloud
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Disglustful? Thanks for giving me a new word!
This series is seriously awesome. You need to write more!
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and then
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and my final reactionforums.watchuseek.com/attachments/f17/714503d1337596284-garish-black-riseman-spotted-sort_of_want.jpg
*slow clapping*
There's a special hell for us.
ugh.......is wrong..............but...
Applecest...is best incest XD
damn, I liked it! specially because Futajack is my Festish! XD lol
...great storie! ....I gonna go so much to hell XD
>> Reik
Would that special hell happen to be reserved for people who take sexual advantage of their hot wives they got while drunk and people who speak in the theater?
2177402 your a fan of Firefly, aren't you
1548220 welcome to the darkside
Luneth wants more futajack
Should be sugarcube. Also that should be a comma afterwards. And while we're at it, this whole paragraph should be split up into at least two, maybe more.
Apparently, word re-use is one of my pet peeves.
"came"