Nice

Interesting.

Always want to see more Cozy, and the premise is fine.

Writing is less than stellar on the technical front, however.

Who would've thought turning a filly to stone would cause trauma and/or brain damage?

I don't know what your native language is, but you might want to try improving your storytelling skills in that language first. After that, you should definitely work on your technical skills in English before trying to write fanfiction in it.

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I have to agree honestly, I find this slightly interesting though, and I’m curious to see if they kept going, how their skills would change over time

“ that’s right cozy we couldn’t just leave a filly your age, trapped in a statue prison even if you did do some horrendous terrible stuff.” Applejack said stepping forward. And I couldn’t believe this. I was trapped in the body of a child not just any child, but cozy glow in the world of my little pony. This means I will never be able to watch the final season. But it seems I might be able to live it. I don’t remember them ever free in Cozy Glow maybe this is something new because I’m here or something. My internal monologue was cut short by rarity speaking up.

Too foward