Fluttershy has a long-lost sister, her name is Ploomette. What will happen when she finds her again?
The second chapter seems to suffer a lot of the same issues as the first. Unnatural character reactions, huge plot armor, illogical situations, and contrived coincidences. And again your prose feels once again AI written.
That's because I can't comprehend human empathy in real life so throwing it into MLP fics makes it even harder, emotions are hard to get down!
The second chapter seems to suffer a lot of the same issues as the first. Unnatural character reactions, huge plot armor, illogical situations, and contrived coincidences. And again your prose feels once again AI written.
That's because I can't comprehend human empathy in real life so throwing it into MLP fics makes it even harder, emotions are hard to get down!