1915732

Glad you like it, but in all honesty, I can not see the difference.
Could you maybe highlight the change?

1915737

Oh sorry my bad

>>“No! It is not! By all means, Luna. Your selfishness is bothering on ignorance!”

>>“No! It is not! By all means, Luna. Your selfishness is bordering on ignorance!”

The use of bothering here is incorrect as it means to irritatie/disturb/intrude etc. Whereas bordering refers to something being adjacent to something else, hence the expression: "Bordering on something".

Hope that clears it up

1915784

Yes it is. Thanks for pointing it out.
Hope to see more comments of you on later chapters!

This sounds like the epic title sequence of an equally epic story.

1916744

Yet the story is not over.
We will have a bit more to cover before we reach MI.

That was friggin' epic!!

1918571

To make the experience perfect, listen to this song:

a couple typos and i think 2 sentences that could be improved:

You would not stand in front of me like that if you would not have a plan you are sure of it will succeed.
(You would not stand in front of me like that if you did not have a plan you are sure will succeed.)

and I hope you do not end up disappointing me, Celestia!

and lastly, heh pinkie's singing is the de manis' weakness (that song celestia sang to it had the same intended effect as giggle at the ghostlies, more or less)