Twilight and her friends find a mysterious magic that ends up corrupting them with lustful powers, turning the Elements of Harmony into the Elements of Lust.
...and her new ability to turn a mare into a bimbo with just a kiss.
I like the concept, but this part kinda threw me for a loop, as it wasn't established beforehand Twilight had this ability. Especially with this earlier sentence:
They didn't yet know what the effects of this might be, but they felt a rush of excitement and anticipation about the potential that the energy within them could hold.
You have a good start here, but you need to make it cohesive. Even using "porn logic," there has to be some sort of bridge between reality and fantasy, otherwise, there's no structure to the plot.
The magic of seduction can change individuals genders species, and how horny they are, through the seductive aura coming off of Twilight, this will be developed further in the next chapter, thank you for giving me advice!
11658229 If you would like to see spike I am sure I can setup a poll to see whose targeted on these of course I need a group of people to give me confirmation just so I know; I won't be wasting my time making polls to see no one show up.
This just feels like a bunch of vaguely horny ideas thrown at a page, like I'm just reading some slightly expanded bullet points. It's not tantalising or interesting to read.
I like the concept, but this part kinda threw me for a loop, as it wasn't established beforehand Twilight had this ability. Especially with this earlier sentence:
You have a good start here, but you need to make it cohesive. Even using "porn logic," there has to be some sort of bridge between reality and fantasy, otherwise, there's no structure to the plot.
The magic of seduction can change individuals genders species, and how horny they are, through the seductive aura coming off of Twilight, this will be developed further in the next chapter, thank you for giving me advice!
Deleting comments -- always a sign of maturity.
Seems interesting
I can see the Mane 6's lewdness will sow chaos for sure
Wonder whats planned for Spike too?
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If you would like to see spike I am sure I can setup a poll to see whose targeted on these of course I need a group of people to give me confirmation just so I know; I won't be wasting my time making polls to see no one show up.
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I figured he could get some sort of 7th Element representing males
I'll check out the poll
How do we post vote on polls?
This just feels like a bunch of vaguely horny ideas thrown at a page, like I'm just reading some slightly expanded bullet points. It's not tantalising or interesting to read.
https://strawpoll.com/wby5A8QjKyA I have created the poll here is your chance to choose who should be transformed in the next chapter!!!