I love this, we don't get a lot of shameless dark zebradom clopfics. So naturally this one ends up in my favorites and I'll be keeping an eye out for more. Other zebradom fics went in different ways, some are even wholesome. But this one is more in line of what I needed in a zebradom fic. A simple zebra conquering Equestria story. I'm excited for this, genuinely

My only criticism would be the spacings

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Thank you alot for the feedback. I have spent hours writing this. English is not my first language. When I have the time I will look to edit and fix those spacing issues. The spacing is so much different than in the word sheet 😇🤗.

I might look up some ai writing tools that supports nsfw works in order to have a better sentence structure to make my story more appealing.

I just finished chapter 4.

If you have any ideas let me know. There is a high chance that I will include them.

One last thing. Chapter 3 took the most effort. Do you think it is important to have a longer more plot based story or a rushed straight to the sex part story?

I like this

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I am a big fan of you work. Im trying to create a masterpice similar to yours.

Cant wait to see chater where he gonna take Celestia and Cadance and impregnate them and make them his broodmares

Bit disappointing that when Obsidian did it with Fluttershy. He didn't receive a good old boobjob/tit**k, considering Fluttershy does has massive milk tanks.

I have a zebra fic myself. And l do like your story that I have add it to my favorites. 👍

That's one spankable Flutterbutt!

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First of all, Thank you for this story I love the darker ones as well where an invasive - dominant species 'wins' in the end.

Usually in the long run as well, stories like this tends to be a lot better if there is enough way and words for the plot to unfold (with longer sex part as well) so I love the longer ones as well.

Looking forward to see more and thank you for making this so far.

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If you need something to help with your English and your grammar I can link you something in private messages to help

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Would appreciate it 😇

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Yea kind of true. He will in future chapters so do not worry about it.

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A mix of both is good for many people but I do prefer rushing straight towards the sex, just my preference though. I do love how a zebra takes what they want, no convoluted ways to get the ponies. He's so strong no one can stop him. It's really good stuff

As for ideas am not sure what's the plan for this story is gonna be. Like is he going to conquer the important mares only like the Mane 6? Maybe some other secondary characters too. I'd love for the zebra to expand to the dragons, hippogriffs, and pretty much all the creatures

Where did you get the art from?

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The general idea is zebra takeover. So there will be all the main characters and princesses being claimed by Obsidian. He will probebly leave the rest of the female population to his zebra buddies. This is the current state.

Nice to have another aficionado providing this type of content