This is very interesting so far, I look forward to seeing how the story concludes. One question though: are the characters anthro? The story isn't tagged for it, but some of the descriptions, plus the use of bikes and cars, is making me wonder.
11643549 They aren't anthro, I just didn't use enough horsey-words... or take the time to describe the contortions necessary to make a quadruped-friendly bike
Hooo, the noose is tightening, but whose neck, or necks, will be in it to catch their last fall? Very tense stuff, a real page turner. Pressing on for more!
This is very interesting so far, I look forward to seeing how the story concludes.
One question though: are the characters anthro? The story isn't tagged for it, but some of the descriptions, plus the use of bikes and cars, is making me wonder.
11643549
They aren't anthro, I just didn't use enough horsey-words... or take the time to describe the contortions necessary to make a quadruped-friendly bike
Hooo, the noose is tightening, but whose neck, or necks, will be in it to catch their last fall? Very tense stuff, a real page turner. Pressing on for more!