11598046 By all means, please do. I enjoy the feedback. Just try not to spoil the chapter for those who haven't read it. Spoiler tags are good for that.
Edit: I've re-read your previous comment. And I'll address it here the best I can.
The next chapter would be a decent place for a one on one talk between Applejack and Belle.
The thing with the guards is a mixed bag since there are technically two events that would have to be looked at. 1: being how they handled the Bullmon incident. 2: being the comments made by the two mares in the bathroom. While punishment would be handled by Celestia or Shinning Armor, they were beaten by Belle herself.
As for Celestia feeling like an idiot about her confusion with Belle and Luna, I only wanted to briefly touch on it since it wasn't the focus of the chapter. Yes she owes Belle an apology and it will come in time.
As for her getting one from the members of the main six, im not sure i fully agree. Pinkie got hurt over Ponyville’s stupidity and how she goes along with it, but at least tried with Belle. Applejack was in the right when she confronted Belle for stealing her apples and got hurt for it. An argument could be made for Rainbow, but she was helping her friend and got hurt worse. As for Rarity, Fluttershy and Twilight, at not point did they do anything wrong outside of taking Celestia at her word. Which was proven false.
So while yes, I didn't completely address the three things you were hoping for, I do have things in mind. I am also one who can easily misunderstand things, so if I do in fact look forward to feedback so I can address things that others want to see in future chapters.
Ha I never thought about the origin of digieggs in such a way, interesting with how long it would last. I will say that after such an event it might have been cool to have her dedigivolve, but hey that is just me. You do you, and have fun!
11598256 Just imagine the God of displaced digimon talking to Marcus and Belle.
God: For you Marcus, I shall grant you the use of alternate forms. Marcus: Bitch'n. God: And for you Belle, thebpain of child birth. Belle: oh what the fuck! *teleports them away to their own stories*
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I might have kind of done two of the three things you've mentioned. I might have missed the first one.
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Not really. You didn't exactly do the last two things either. Word for word I mean.
Comment back, and I will fully explain later.
11598046
By all means, please do. I enjoy the feedback. Just try not to spoil the chapter for those who haven't read it. Spoiler tags are good for that.
Edit: I've re-read your previous comment. And I'll address it here the best I can.
The next chapter would be a decent place for a one on one talk between Applejack and Belle.
The thing with the guards is a mixed bag since there are technically two events that would have to be looked at. 1: being how they handled the Bullmon incident. 2: being the comments made by the two mares in the bathroom. While punishment would be handled by Celestia or Shinning Armor, they were beaten by Belle herself.
As for Celestia feeling like an idiot about her confusion with Belle and Luna,
I only wanted to briefly touch on it since it wasn't the focus of the chapter. Yes she owes Belle an apology and it will come in time.
As for her getting one from the members of the main six, im not sure i fully agree. Pinkie got hurt over Ponyville’s stupidity and how she goes along with it, but at least tried with Belle. Applejack was in the right when she confronted Belle for stealing her apples and got hurt for it. An argument could be made for Rainbow, but she was helping her friend and got hurt worse. As for Rarity, Fluttershy and Twilight, at not point did they do anything wrong outside of taking Celestia at her word. Which was proven false.
So while yes, I didn't completely address the three things you were hoping for, I do have things in mind. I am also one who can easily misunderstand things, so if I do in fact look forward to feedback so I can address things that others want to see in future chapters.
Ha I never thought about the origin of digieggs in such a way, interesting with how long it would last. I will say that after such an event it might have been cool to have her dedigivolve, but hey that is just me. You do you, and have fun!
11598256
Just imagine the God of displaced digimon talking to Marcus and Belle.
God: For you Marcus, I shall grant you the use of alternate forms.
Marcus: Bitch'n.
God: And for you Belle, thebpain of child birth.
Belle: oh what the fuck!
*teleports them away to their own stories*
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Hahaha, yes that is one of the very few breaks that Marcus was given in his life.