Chapter 0 prologue (edited)
We begin our story during the beginning of summer break, where our main character has just gotten home from school
"Ugh finally school's over!" Zoe exclaimed in frustration
"Just for the summer brat, remember that got it!?" Zoe's 'father' yelled from the living room making Zoe flinch
"At least I'll be out of the house for the rest of the day" Zoe mumbled as she went upstairs to her room to get her costume for a convention that she didn't tell her 'father' about
Zoe had waited till dawn to sneak out as that is the time her so called father focuses on her the least, she also took her 'fathers' keys and some money, when she arrived at the convention she quickly put on her costume which was a almost complete costume of Uzi from the new series on the YouTube channel GLITCH
'sigh' "let's see what this place will do for me before I have to go back to the hell that is home" Zoe sighed as she walked into the convention meeting a lot of people, after a while she met someone she didn't expect to
"Hiya! Nice to meet you, I'm dressed as Tari from meta runners, what are you dressed as if I may ask?" The meta runner introduced herself
"..Uzi, from murder drones, from the same channel as meta runners, how do you not know that?" Zoe responded and questioned
"Oh! That's really cool and simple, I stopped watching after the meta runner series finished! Hehe" the meta runner bashfully smiled while rubbing the back of her head
'sigh' "just don't bother me, I'm going to look for something to buy" Zoe requested as she left to find something to buy
As she was looking around she found a shady and slightly rundown stall in a corner and decided to check it out, when she got to the stall she sees many different items on the table, however only two peaked her interest
"Find anything you like little worker drone?" A strange and suspicious voice spoke
"Gah! bite me!, And yes I did, how much for the railgun and phone?" Zoe exclaimed
"Hmm, well for suck a hard working gal I'll say, $150, take it or leave it" the strange merchant explained
"Great!, Here you go!" Zoe exclaimed as she gave the stranger the money and took her railgun and phone
"Have a great trip now..." The strange man states as the world seams to darken
"Huh? What do you..mean...why am..I..so.-" Zoe spoke just before she blacked out
meanwhile in Equestria, sugar cube corner
It had been a while but pinkie had finally finished her shift, not that she disliked her job or anything, quite the opposite actually, she just doesn't want to miss out on what her friends are doing today as her pinkie sense told her that today was going to be a doozy, as she finished her shift she was about to leave her home/workplace to see what her friends were up to today when, -THUD- she heard a light thud coming from her room so she ran up their to see what the sound was
"I could have told them that silly!" Pinkie told the narrator Breaking the fourth wall
When pinkie got to her room she found a strange bipedal creature about the size of a foal lying on the floor, from what she can see the creature is fully made out of a type of metal, wearing a black hoodie with a weird symbol on one of the shoulders and a skirt at the bottom of the hoodie, purple and pink striped socks, black leather boots, purple hair and a beanie
"What is this?" Pinkie asks to herself and the narrator, as the pink party pony inspects the creature she sees that it has a pure white metallic lower portion of the face and an almost pitch black tinted glass for the upper portion of the face and she gets an idea
"Oh! I bet Twilight would know what this is!" Pinkie exclaims before putting the creature on her back and running to the golden oaks library, nearly dropping the small creature more than a few times
golden oaks library
"Just what was that magical disturbance? It must be something serious if princess celestia sent a letter about it" Twilight sparkle spoke her thoughts aloud
"Should we get the girls?" Twilight's number 1 assistant spike asked Twilight
"That's a good idea spi-" Twilight is interupted by a knocking at the front door of her home/library
"Give me a second spike, I've got to get the door" Twilight told her number one assistant as she opened the door to a surprising sight
"Pinkie?" Twilight asks in confusion
"Hiya Twilight! I uh needed to ask you a question, but first, can I come in?" Pinkie asks Twilight
"Uh sure come on in, so, what was it you wanted to ask about?" Twilight questioned her pink friend in curiosity and concern as she doesn't usually see pinkie tired
"Well it's not so much a what I want to talk about and more a what I found" pinkie responds as she lets the creature slide of her back and onto the ground giving Twilight another great suprise
"Do you know what they are Twilight?" Pinkie asked her surprised and shocked librarian friend
"No.. no I don't pinkie, I've never seen anything like it before, where and when did you find it?" Twilight asked her spontaneous pink friend
"I found it in my room! After I finished my shift and then heard a thud so then I rushed up the stairs and found them just lying on the floor so I put them on my back and ssslllooowwwlllyyy made my way over here to show you, that was 30 minutes ago hehe" pinkie exclaimed in a single breath
" That was around the same time as the magical disturbance... and your sure it just popped up in your room?" Twilight asked her friend just to be sure
"Absopositly Twilight!" Pinkie answered
"Hmm spike!" Twilight called for her assistant/little bro
"Yeah Twilight?!" Spike shouted from upstairs
"I need you to take a letter!" Twilight shouted back
"Alright! Just give me a second to get my ink and quill!!" Spike responded just before his footsteps from upstairs, the sound of paper and the sound of a baby dragon falling down the stairs could be heard
"Are you ok spike?" Twilight asked concerned for her dragon brother
"Yea I'm ok Twilight! Dragon scales remember? So what did you want on that letter" Spike reminded his pony sister
"O-oh right, anyway, Dear princess celestia
one royal letter later
From, your faithful student Twilight sparkle" Twilight spoke as spike finished the letter and sent it to princess celestia
"Now what to do with you?" Twilight spoke with a thoughtful expression when suddenly!!
[Worker Drone, Designation: Uzi powering on]
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I love Murder Drones, but here's the first question to ask: Where are your punctuations, dear author?
Also, seriously, please don't caption your own writing. It makes the invisible narrator sound really unreliable and compromises your entire storytelling. As an author, you really should consider keeping the distance from your readers when telling the stories, so as not to break the magic of literature.
For example, this paragraph:
Wouldn't it be better if you describe—portray—how Uzi looks like? Not only is that quite fitting of the plot, (since Pinkie was observing the protagonist,) but you also keep the story consistent by sticking to in-universe knowledge.
I like this idea, but you really need to pay more attention to details like punctuation and capital letters. Omitting one or two full stops, I could understand, but at the end of every paragraph? Perhaps too much to ignore.
cool keep up the good work
I shall keep a close eye on this one.
Also, have your first like as a symbol of my goodwill.
Thank you all for your constructive criticism considering I uploaded this story literally today
hooray! A murder Drones cross over! I was wondering if these were ever going to be made.
Remember, the Absolute Solver only affects anything metallic and mechanical, not on everything or probably has zero affects on organic targets. And her railgun has a 30 minute charge so she can only use it as a last resort or as a "F u" Fatality on some poor bastard.
Oh, canon Uzi had learn martial arts via pirated movies and she's an android with a metal body. Pretty sure she could go toe to toe with AJ or Dash in a fist fight if it comes to blow
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I’m pretty sure the absolute solver can do stuff to organic matter, considering what it did to that arrow in the latest episode
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HOLD IT! But that arrow has a METALIC tip. So yeah she could redirect it
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I’m not talking about how she redirected it I am talking about how she turned it into an organic abomination
Be sure to try and avoid making too many stories, otherwise you'll find yourself mentally burnt out and possible be unable to write more chapters.
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Absolute solver can indeed affect organic material as when Uzi had transformed in episode 4 her wings and tail were organic, she is a singularity between biology and technoligy
Why are we still here? Just to suffer? Every night, I can feel my leg… and my arm… even my fingers. The body I’ve lost… won’t stop hurting…
You seriously want to write fanfic for murder drone? that thing currently barely has any lore to go off with. only speculations from fans.
It's like RWBY you know? animator just want something cool looking and made up plot to make it possible afterward. there's actually nothing going on behind the scene.
currently, they make it all cryptic and shit so that they have leeway to go off any direction they want.
why do i know this? my favorite animation studio, GAINEX, also use same tactic.
Absolute Solver can be anything at this point. a virus, a singularity AGI, an eldritch entity, a human mind,a demon, future-self,builtin secret program, secret of universe.
1. I like the story so far. Nothing crazy but a good start leaves an open caves for what you want to do in the story.
2. No idea.
3. Are you open to the idea of having other displaced enter your fanfic like when other displaced utilize tokens to call other for help?
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I am, I just don't know where or how to reach out to other creators to get their permition
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When you want to cross-over with someone, you send them a message asking. If they agree to it, you make a google doc, change sharing permissions to 'editor' and send them a link. You will then write the next chapter, writing what your character was doing before they found the token, heard the tokens message, and then summoned that Displaced. The person you're writing with will then control their character and reply accordingly. Now, before you go doing all of that, you must ask yourself 'why' you want your character to summon them, you can't just do a cross-over without it holding some form of important to the character's growth, world building, and story progression, otherwise your readers will hate it, especially if the chapter the cross-over takes place has too much talking.
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Does it matter what displaced it is? Or can it be anything?
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Pretty much anything, any suggestions, I have a few ideas in mind already but I also want to hear your ideas
Bro who's zoe? So it's just an uzi cosplayer?
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Yes, however overtime she becomes more and more like the actual Uzi